Admin, management, and what am I doing

Now that there's two, I wouldn't mind comments, anonymous even, to tell me what you liked.

That sounds like I want ego stroking, but seriously. I know there's plenty not to like. This is conceptual, and first draft. I'm not looking for real critique. I'm trying to decide what to pursue.

So, of the characters that show up, some of them will possibly show up multiple times. Let me know which ones you like and why. Any suggestions for where they should go would be great.